Post by puppeteer on Aug 4, 2011 9:49:42 GMT -5
smokepaw
EXCUSE ME, IS MY RANT TAKING TOO LONG?
IS IT GETTING IN THE WAY OF THIS LOVELY SONG?
JUST PROMISE ME YOU'LL NEVER LEAVE ME
I'D DIE IF YOU LEAVE ME
EXCUSE ME, IS MY RANT TAKING TOO LONG?
IS IT GETTING IN THE WAY OF THIS LOVELY SONG?
JUST PROMISE ME YOU'LL NEVER LEAVE ME
I'D DIE IF YOU LEAVE ME
NAME...smokekitSmokepawSmokeheart
AGE... Seven (7) Moons
GENDER... Tom (Male)
CLAN... Seaclan
POSITION... Apprentice
APPEARANCE...Smokepaw, being as young as he is, is rather tall. Lean and lanky, his body is still growing, causing him to often fall over himself while practicing hunting and defending himself. Other than that, this young smoke gray short-hair tabby has piercing, dark blue eyes. His ears are proportionate for a young cat, having the tips rounding off at the ends. Down to his jaw, his whiskers are long and embellish his face. His underside is white with some of his tabby stripes stretching across. His legs, lanky and remotely like stilts for this young apprentice, are ended with paws larger than one would expect. Across his lean stomach to his tail, with a length of about seven and a half mouse-lengths, flicks at points where Smokepaw is irritated, frustrated, or even excited.
PERSONALITY...Smokepaw is almost always angry or frustrated. He seems to always take his anger out on himself and his actions; however, feeling as if he is incapable of doing great things. Smokepaw tries to be confident in his abilities, but he has no goals that would include becoming deputy or even leader. He also has a tendency to speak callously and rudely when taking out pent-up anger, and for the most part, everyone sees it because he feels that he can’t be good enough for anyone or anything. Smokepaw also distances himself, emotionally, from everyone in the clan except for his littermates and his mentor. All of his trust belongs to those four cats, and if anything were to happen to them, it would cause Smokepaw to lose control of his anger, and he knew only death would stop him.
HISTORY...Seven moons ago, five kits were born to father Hawkclaw and mother Raineyes. Three kits inherited their mother’s long, feathery fur, and two inherited their father’s short, smooth fur. Smokekit, as he was named, took after his father and his mother, with his mother’s dark blue eyes. His only brother, Snowkit, took after his mother with her white fur and blue eyes, but did not have deafness that was revealed well into kithood. Smokekit was relieved, as were Hawkclaw and Raineyes. Their three sisters were all named after animals, Sparrowkit (she looked like their father with amber eyes), Mousekit (long, mousy-brown fur with green eyes), and Doekit (a long-haired calico with green eyes) and for the most part, the five kits all got along. For six moons they lived with Raineyes in the Queen’s den, but all five wanted to be out of the den by four moons, but they dealt with it for two moons so they could leap into the fade, otherwise known as Clan life. At six moons they removed the suffix –kit and gained –paw. Smokepaw has been the only apprentice vocal (to his siblings) about what he wants his name to be for when he becomes a warrior, Smokeheart, for his occasional callousness and darker views on the Clan life that he loves so much.
